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herneoakshield · VII - The Chariot Joined: 14 Aug 2007 Posts: 142

Two more of my poems. I'm certainly no expert, in fact the four poems I have posted up here are the sum total of my poetic works and they were all written two years ago. maybe I should try writing some more soon.

Night Terrors

The light through the window shines so bright,
clearing away the dark troubled night,
the terrors are gone to trouble no more,
lets put it behind or under the floor.
The fear and despair, vanish from sight,
as the new day dawns destroying the fright...

© HerneOakshield

Questions

The office is busy but I am alone,
waiting for a time when I can go home,
faces and voices invade my mind,
asking for help they cannot find,
disturbing my thoughts with questions galore,
am I sure I can cope with more?

© HerneOakshield
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RavenStar · Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 8:50 pm Post subject:

I think you have a natural talent there Herne ~ you best get writing!!

herneoakshield · VII - The Chariot Joined: 14 Aug 2007 Posts: 142

I'm glad you like them

though Questions is rather depressing really, mind you my head space was in a bad place at the time I wrote it at work just before I went off sick.

One day my muse will return

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Riktor48 · Admin Joined: 11 Aug 2007 Posts: 1286 Location: Essex, UK

I get the impression Herne is very much at home here............. LOL Sign

But seriously - yes, you really must write some more!

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Koko · Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 1:12 am Post subject:

I agree!!! More please. You are very good.
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SageCat · Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 7:42 pm Post subject:

Definitely more please Herne!

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Minty · Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2007 10:39 pm Post subject:

Yep, more, more, more!!! hehe

BB, Minty. xx

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